The women who lived in 1771 -_-||
Last friday i went to the field trip, we met a “colonial woman”who was 25 years old lived in 1771. She was married to an older man more than 40 years old she had to be mother to his four children ,I think she was married for money because at thant time a lot of people don’t have enought food to eat ,but the women still cook and their house looks good, their bed looks warm and they have woof to sleep on…
Some people marry for money,I think not too bad, because they have to live they need money for their life.If their husband not too bad. They could marry whit them to engoy their life but if their husband only could give their money. They will no happy in their life. I want marry someone who have not to be very rich,and not very poor. I don’t need his money..because i think i can and i will make money by myself. I will only need him to give me happy, love and a wonderful family!
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18:57:41
I love this part of your comments: I will only need him to give me happy, love and a wonderful family!
Very beautiful!
Ella, you have 4 run-on sentences! Please go back and put periods between sentences. Remember a period is not the same as a comma. “She was married to an older man more than 40 years old she had to be mother to his four children ,I think she was married for money because at thant time a lot of people don’t have enought food to eat ,but the women still cook and their house looks good, their bed looks warm and they have woof to sleep on…” Ah, very long!
Ella, if you fix your run-ons and put periods, you can get more points:>
Good luck for your exams.